I have developed so much, not only from paper 1 to paper 2, but just from my first draft of paper 2, to my final draft of paper 2. I used to never understand how to incorporate my own opinion into my writing and when I would try it was not obvious to the reader, I would sort of hint at my opinion without actually getting it out there. This is something that I have improved on the most and really developed this skill into all of my writing with ease. By paper 2 I was able to get my opinion out there finally and show the reader my beliefs on certain topics without being unsure of myself or of my writing, I was so much more comfortable with everything I was doing. In paper 2 I did a lot of comparing to the UNE CAS Core Curriculum, I talked about what curriculum UNE uses and how that connected to our readings, while also incorporating my own opinion.
