For my revision process of this paper I probably put in the most time compared to my other 2 papers. After writing the first draft and talking about it as a class, having it peer evaluated, and having a meeting with my professor I realized that I wanted to change so much. I had so many different ideas running through my mind and I wanted to get them all into my essay while still having everything connect and make sense. After talking about my paper and reflecting on my peers comments I rearranged my entire essay and made it something I was truly proud of. My first draft was not bad but it was not something I wanted to turn in. My revision process was something that I truly appreciate because everyone had made so many good points it honestly made slightly change my mind about my essay and I ended up tweaking my point of view because my group members had helped me look at the prompt and the readings in a way that I never thought of so I wanted to reflect on that in my essay.
